Robot Love
Nize pilot Thistler. "PILOT" iz da operative word people! Don't get down dude. Your true fanz appreciate ya work.
Reviews for "Sitcom - pilot (revised)"
Intresting
If this were a real sitcom, the censors would have really changed it, but it was an admriable movie. I enjoyed it, I think .....
The ending has a good twist
This was a pretty good short. The ending has a good twist, but it's strange how you go from the guy getting the droid as a gift to him sleeping with the droid. I'd imagine alcohol was involved :)
Weird...
...but quite ammusing. Sound quality was a bit iffy though...
thistler responds:
at the time of making this, i didnt have a good sound setup, its about the time my soundcard packed it in, glad u liked it though :)
Good effort
It was an okay submission, a few points:
Art/Animation - The artwork was pretty good actually, however the animation let it down a bit, the bouncing droid bits were a bit too 'floatey', ie they didn't bounce very realistically because they were too slow.
Sound - The main failing, the recording quality is poor and the characters could be voice acted with a bit more emotion behind them rather than seeming lifeless (the two human ones at least!). You can solve recording problems by getting a decent microphone, they're not really that expensive these days. The latter just requires practise so I won't hold it against you much.
The robot voice though is not very good, it would be better if you stuck with something less synthetic, ie mainly voice acted but with more of a robotic hint to it, it should be fairly clear from the artwork if a robot is talking or not anyway :)
Style/Humour - It was a little bit funny, though it could have been better, it has potential though, best thing is to bounce ideas off of a friend or group of friends, you find that this inevitably results in some hilarious things being said which you could use.