Reviews for A piece of puke

[Little-Rena]

Funny Short

Well it was pretty short, so making it longer might have been a little better though I can't see what you could have added. But other than that, the animation here was nice and smooth as well as the graphics, much better than what I was expecting at first that's for sure. The sound effects where good and everything, clear to hear and watch.

The filesize is also very nice, though I didn't expect it to be big for something short like this. The main thing I would want to see is something a little longer but none the less, it's still very good work.

4/5

<3

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[LenardNotLenny]

I fucking love this.

Its hilarious. You sort of had a Rageish style going, but it was way smoother and more pleasing to my eyes. The sound effects had me cracking up. This is an awesome, stupid, retarded, piece of flash.

[WritersBlock]

<3 style

The style is great. The animation had a kind of Dan Paladin style about it. It was funny, it was random. It was very random.
I think that if you can come up with a good plot with some substance, and keep up the humour you used here, that and your smooth funky animation style, you could snag yourself an award or 2.

10/10 because it's just so slick, and the animation is top notch, and it made me laugh. Even though I think you need to make it longer, extend a plot out, but keep the randomness.

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[NintendoMadness]

4/5 and 9/10

- Good stuff -
The idea was very random, but I liked that. The colours added to the random effect, with some bright and some dark colours. The sounds were very funny and yet AGAIN added to the randomness.

- Bad stuff and improvments -
Way too short, some ways you could make this longer is developing it much more by making it into a random collab (but with some guidlines) or lengthen it yourself but give it more of a story but still keep the story to the minimum and the randomness to the maximum.

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[Coop]

Quite Random indeed

What I'd really say that you need to do with this creation is to give it a little more 'oomph'. I'd suggest that you take it further, by having something else happen to the 'sick guy'. Maybe have it precipitate into a larger being walks past him and something comes of that new situation, where you can give us more surreal works.

I'd certainly like to see what you're capable of writing, as the animation style is nice. It's easy on the eyes and you can quite easily see what high quality you've achieved.

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Pepeto responds:

Hehe, thanks for your review.