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Reviews for "Dear Diary Episode One"

poor... but keep at it

in all honesty, i think everything after the what you showed in the preview wasnt very good
if you make episode 2, try too make it consistantly funny
i know that sounds difficult, but try too put more time into it
and like i said about the preview, draw your animation with the pencil tool instead of using lines, boxes and circles
keep at it though

bleeding-spaz responds:

I Know.
Episode 2 Is Being Recorded. I've Spent More Time MAking One Scene, Then I Did Maikng The First Episode. I Will work With The Pencil Tool. Thanx For The Pointers!

Hmmmmmm...

I think if you were to partner up with another animator, that may or may not help! I didn't see much improvement from the preview to this, so I can only assume that they were both made simultaneously! I think if you went back to the "drawing board", & worked on the animation yourself, you might be able to hone your skills! I mean, that really is the best way to graduate skill! But don't give up... I still think you have something here! Ciao!

lol

its the second time u have uploaded this one huh?? hehe well this time i gave u a tumbs up to see if it doesn't get blammed...

on your next entry
try making animations-not just drawings
sound its ok
try making a better plot

cya