Blimey that's good
Really wicked. Best things: Your comments in the author comments: yes I will go and make some; your artwork, it's a very nice style; the story, music and effect, wow!
things i didn't like: The guy's nipples. Yeeek I'm gonna have nightmares about them!
The nipples are probably my favourite part, aswell as the sound he makes when he rubs them.
Finally...
I've been a fan of you ever since i witnessed the awesomeness of I AM CORN, glad you got some work on the front page.
David Firth
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i enjoyed this very much so keep up the handy work ameigo!
Thanks Toddles.
Wow
That was wonderful, it actually sent a huge chill up my spine. The ending was awesome. Grand job.
Catbear
Nothing like a warm, fuzzy ending.