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Like you said, the intro to this movie is far too long. You give a short intro to each character with their name and a nickname, but I honestly don't remember their names right after watching it, so the intro doesn't serve much purpose, especially since only two characters show up in the movie itself. The animations were pretty good. Smooth and all, but the sprites were very pixilated. Looked to me like you made this in some cheap Flash ripoff, but I could be wrong.
Yeah it did have to be redone so check out the newer version
"that wasn't bad"
the intro is way too long and you shold use sounds.
try to create something simpler and with sounds :)
Should have been more than just a fight,
The intro text was kinda cool. I take it that's not done in flash, but rather just exported to an .avi or whatever, then imported into Flash? Really, apart from the intro text, there's nothing that couldn't be easily done within Flash itself. And then the filesize would probably be a lot smaller and we wouldn't have all these visual artifacts.
The episode itself just seemed to consist of a fight. No sfx, so it was actually less entertaining than just watching someone play the game, let alone playing it ourselves. I was expecting a bit of narrative, a bit of character interaction beyond the fisticuffs.
I actually kinda liked the fact that you introduce the characters and the layout of the text and stuff looked cool in the intro.
Overall though, it never really entertained me.
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not bad but...
the animation and ''mixing" sprites need work
Yeah this was not my best one at all
Could be better.
I will congratulate you for it being your first flash, but there were a few things that if fixed could make the animation better:
1- Do not, ever, under any conditions, get an .avi to .swf. It just looks terribly awful.
2- Shorten the character presentation, or just show the one's that are going to take part in the flash.
3- Use different camera angles, and improve the movement illusion. The sprites look a bit choppy.
It was very good for a first flash, though! The main problem was the conversion from .avi to .swf
Thanks...I won't ever use a converter