Wow
Hey there,
Wow... really nice feel to it. Everything was very nicely put together.
It sorta felt like cyber or dark wave, exept for the happy melody :)
The beat was simple but very nicely fited the song.
Critisism:
I dont know if it is me, but the lead synth sounds SERIOUSLY out of sync in places. Espe. at the start.
other than that, this is a very nice piece
Looking foreword to the full version.
Cyaz
DarkAngel out...
5/5
As with many of my compositions, I am very heavy into syncing up melodies to make them catchy. I'll have to go in and check again, it is possible that there are a few notes that are off, but not more than a cent or two. If you hear somthing that is seriously out of sych, then that was intended (of course, if it was distracting, I should do some modifications, regardless if it was what I intended or not).
At any rate, thanks for the review and the vote!
nice
nicely done! i just wish it was longer :(
Kickin it old skool
Always good to hear.
The beginning pads and chords weer amazing, loved it, not too much to complain about there.
My main complaint is aobut the beginning...When you bring in the main lead.
Its too...harsh!
When it all breaks in, and its all sexy n stuff, its great, and really gets the point across.
But when you first bring it in, id suggest a softer lead, maybe without it being so rough like.
Much more drama would be brought in using this technique.
I like your hat work, sounds very realistic, but id like to hear at the 8 bar break in on the melody a nice, hi ended, reverbed open hat.
Wow, would that ever bring the song together.
This is making me wish i was 14 in the 90s, and not now, so i could enjoy good music lie this back then, eh?
Great work, needs improvment and a bit of dynamics, but hell, this is a preview!
-zenon-
PS: Nice animal sounds. Very realistic. also, 6 for effort cause its a demo >:(
Wow, awsome suggestions here! I will definately change around the lead, I like the ideas you suggested. In a newer version, I already have a hat going in the 8 bar break, and it definately does sound better. Thanks again for the great ideas!