Wao
What a nice music.. ..what a nice atmosphere in the flash...
Great artork and graphics.. It should be colored!! :)
Keep up the good work!! The score should be more than it is!!!! :D
Reviews for "Every Weekday"
RiceMonkey responds:
Whoa! I never expected this D: Thanks a lot!
and as far as coloring goes, he just got out of school in color
kewl
really good for no color and for a sorta half way kinda beginner lol.
Class time?
I enjoyed this . It was a nice change of pace.
Did you mean for your character to go to school at night and leave in the morning?
I was just wondering. Because when he arrives at school the moon's out and when he leaves the sun's out.
Also I got a kick out of the wall damage where his backpack hits the wall every time he gets jome from school.
Good job man.
RiceMonkey responds:
it was more like leave in the morning, when the moons out, and come back in the afternoon D: But I see what you mean. thanks for the review
Everyone's day!
Everyone's day must be like this. Well. I know mine is. And it doesn't look that bad, compared to some of the other worthless crap in the portal. This acctually had some potiential. I don't know if color would spice it up, but some shading would. The dark tones give it potiential.
The only art thing that really bugged me is sometimes he is transparent. Well..you are the artist, you know that. But I LOVE how it loops. Well...its probally because you didn't want to put an ending clip on it, more work, right? It gives me the feel of how boring his life really is.
Good Job
[4/5]
~Itami~
RiceMonkey responds:
he was transparent because like, I would draw him, then tween him, but would forget to fill him in, and I didn't know how to fill him up after he was already a movie clip. I could he undo'd.... wonder why I didn't D: Thanks for the review.
use layers
use layers, it really makes everything easy.
and if ur gonna use black and white, fill in the characters and layers with white.
RiceMonkey responds:
I did use layers, and I explained why he wasn't filled in sometimes :<
thanks though...