Reviews for ==Hentai Adventure Game==

[purpleorange]

It's, well there's room to grow.

It was ok but it was more or less an elaborate slideshow.
The plot was, new so I give you credit for that but, I'm not really impressed with anything else.. It doesn't really take and time to write a small script and have a whole bunch of images.
(Note: In the "Tutorial" the angel says "Answer peoples questions the questions they ask.")
So let's do some construction shall we?
Figure out some game mechanics, add a little more interactivity than some simple timeframe manipulation attached to some buttons..
Graphics seemed.. Really.. Really mixed.. There's not much you can reeallllyyy do about that, since your using others art but, yah know, just pointing it out to you.

It's not bad, but it feels a lot like a carbon copy of any other H game on this site.. (With the exception of ones you control)
Last thing, I gave you a 6, and that's generous, it's not a good flash..
It's not your art, it's not your concept, and it's nothing fresh, really it deserves a 2, maybe a 3.. But I'm being nice because there is SOME effort here.

But, don't expect anything more than a low score for something to this effect.

Good luck with future projects~

Phantox responds:

Flash by purpleorange: 0.

I don't want you to say that this was a simple game. Maybe you should try doing the same thing with the following:

1. High quality pics
2. Health AS
3. The text box for the name
4. Original Plot

Good luck.

[highwatermark]

Not bad, but not original and definitely inferior.

Since my score is lower than a 7, I'll provide some constructive criticism.

Instead of directly following the Kramer series and adding a main character, you turned into a first-person playing style with yourself as the character. However, by turning into a game like that, it lacks action pictures and a great deal of sex scenes (Compare to "Hentai Bliss RPG" to see what I mean). Plot isn't intriguing, sex scenes downright suck with only few pictures (people fap to ONE picture?), and it was just too short. Finally, really not worth 7.5 megs. Learn from the "Hentai Bliss RPG" series, and you'll probably get a lot more 10s in reviews and a score of over 4.00. There is great potential here.

Well, congrats on the daily award which you finally got, and let's see how well you did (and do through the week)!

HERES THE CONSTRUCTIVE PART:

1. Make it longer, more captivating, and more pictures. This is barely worth 7.5 MB.
2. If you're really aiming for a weekly award (Review Crew or something), don't submit it Tuesday! Your won't have an appreciating audience, and sometimes you won't even get 30 reviews that you need.

Phantox responds:

1. At least this is better than the last review you gave me.

2. I am not planning on getting an award from this and I highly doubt it will get it.

3. Stop comparing this to the HB series. This is NOT a role playing flash. I was aiming on making it the same thing like the Kramer and SK series but with a first person touch to it.

4. Length: I wrote the following in the author comments "The game is quite short because I wanted to see if you guys liked it. I didn't want to work on a game for a very long time and then at the end find out that people thought it sucked."

5. The high file size was because of the music, sounds, image quality (saved them all in high quality) and the gifs that I used.

That's all for my response.

Also, stop giving all my flashes a low review score. I'm not doing it to you so don't do it to me either.

[Link7057]

i reviewed as i played

the songs was great i think you got it from golden sun 2...the pics were great and i think you should keep going the story seems to be great keep on going dont listen to people like mrkomiks who have nothing to say but bad things with no kind of advice...but all in all it was good

Phantox responds:

Yep the songs where all from golden sun 1 and 2. I'm gonna continue the story with the same characters and all that stuff. Keep an eye out for it

[Omally28]

Okay

It was easy and Simple.

Nice background music and pictures of course.

All in all nice job.

Phantox responds:

"All in all nice job."

Then why the 7?

[IllusionOfChaos]

Nice questions?

Nice anime game I guess. Didn't know what hentai was before this 0 _ o

Phantox responds:

You've got to be kidding me! =O

Well at least you know now ;P