Ok...
Like most people have been saying there isnt much to the plot. Dont get me wrong i like the story and the animation. The only thing i dont get is why he took out the plane. What did that guy ever do to him? but overall good work and maybe next time throw in some fighting action and some damsels in distress. That should work out nicely. Keep it up man!
Good but...
It needs a lot of work. Why in gods name would someone just destroy a plane? Will this be explained in the next episode? What did he find down there?
You have a lot of plot holes just wide the heck open and should try to either explain all of these in the next episode or consider redoing the present one so a bit more is explained.
On a good note though, you did well (better than most) with your flash and its animation. So keep that up and continue to improve your abilities.
6/10
3/5
Thanx to you all. And yes, things will be more clearer at Ep 2. So keep waiting. :)
Hidden review :P
Animation was pretty good. I felt it was a bit overly long though because alot didn't happen. And the main guy's roll was pretty much unexplained to what happened to him. The cave part should have been developed more.
Wow it was kind of entertaining...?
Its fairly good animation, and a bitg entertaining. i see you can improve, but it was a good flash. Good job, but the only thing this DOESNT have is a real plot.... Im sure in your movies soon to COME you will build on this... (i hope). Most of your plot was previously done from what I could see, thus a cloche. Seeing this plot over again and again bores me to death, this is the same as many other plots. Be original and build up your plot a little over time or chances are people wont watch you like i almost did.
it shood be faster.
It was a boring movie.
I agre i was a bit to slow. Well ppl lear from mistakes :)