DESERVES a 4/10
When I first watched this flash it seemed like there was no sound. But there was text scrolling up the screen.
"oh the volume must be too low" I thought.
SO I turned up the volume so I could hear the worst attempt at an English accent ever.
You might have worked hard on the backrounds and plot, but this lacks any polish at all.
So lets just break it down into some easy to read points whats wrong here
*** first is the voices. the volume is too low and the sounds are too loud, thus drowning out the voices. Also all the accents were awful. You sound like you're 12. But a better mic, they dont cost much. It sounds like you're shouting through a hotdog bun. It's so muffled. And get some voice actors. All the characters sound like preteen kids.
*** Its nice that you made your own original sprites but these dont look good. Very generic "fantasy genre" designs. Also, animation in flash where you tween all the body parts of your characters around doesnt look good. It never has. It looks cheap and unnatural and lazy.
Things I liked:
*** the plot. if you could make this look not so crappy, it could be a very nice series. but as of now it looks like a newbie at flash did it.
*** the backround art. particularly the forest. light grey color pallets and soft lighting choices made it look very nice. the only trouble is, your tiny rectangular characters stick out way too much with their bright colors and pencil-tool outlines.
Of course, you're not going to read anything I wrote and will just whine that I didnt give it a 10/10 due to your own arrogance.
I hope you try harder next time.