This is well made
This is well made
Eh, a little choppy.
Some of the frames made big jumps in action, as opposed to other being very close for a smooth transition. Do a little more work and you can only get better.
those big choppy things were me trying to make things move faster, but I guess i just underestimated the frame rate and made it was too fast. next time i'll concentrate on making really small adjustments all the time. 4/10? :(