Alright work on this pretty funny
Reviews for "A breads life"
lol
funny stuff, man - But I will say this: Unless this was a stylistic choice, I would have made the backgrounds more detailed, or at least a little more readable. For example, the scene on the beach to me looked like he was floating in a yellow sky by a wave, so if you made it more like a sand color and put him at an angle, that could help the readability. Still, it got the point across overall - bread cancer lol.
Lochie responds:
Well you knew he was at a beach by the end right..? :D
Alright...
Hawaii is in the Pacific.
Lochie responds:
You wish it was in the Pacific.
It was ok
The only real problem I see with this is that you have Hawaii in the wrong ocean.
Lochie responds:
That is the exact point.
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A breads life, simply fantastic!
Lochie responds:
Bad bread, Bad bread. Whatcha gunna do?