Pretty good
it was funny, that's all that matters.
Pretty good
it was funny, that's all that matters.
it's decent
not bad at all! a bit choppy, but i don't think you did that on purpose.
I suppose for your first...
I suppose for your first type of submission, this isn't bad. I can't say that the submission was terrible, but it just seemed so oddley made. The movements didin't really seem smooth or concise, and if anything, they moved very clunky, like that of a robot. The graphics were also very reminescent of a first submission, although it again, wasn't bad, it just didin't have that "it" factor to it, it wasn't top notch so to speak. This submission really didin't entertain me, and the unorginal end made the flash seem sour. Overall, a good first flash, but other then that it's really not great.
good
very well put together
good job
the ending was nice