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Reviews for "November Breeze"

Good

Except the crash ping-pong delay effect really bugged me. The crash wasn't long enough to overlap between the stereo seperation, and it just sounded empty and incomplete.
The part where the bass pads come in at the start was pretty awesome, and the square plucks added some bounce to the track.
The vocals would have sounded great with a backing synth mispitched maybe a fourth higher or lower than the pitch of the vocals.
However, the track seems to me like it's missing something. You have the beat, the bass and the lead, but there needs to be something else in there to fill out the track. At the moment there sounds like there should be another instrument that would round out the whole song perfectly, but it isn't there.
Overall not a bad song, but there there is definitely some room for improvement.

Pulstate responds:

Excellent review, thank you.

The delay was actually removed, but it's still present in this MP3, apologies for this.

There is definitely room for improvement! :)

I hear some Above & Beyond influence...

Excellent song Pulstate. It reminds me of Children by Robert Miles.

My only issue with the song is the sweep effect and the delay on the crash. The sweep tends to lack energy and is way overused. Please try and stay away from that next time.

I am looking forward to your next release, let me know when it's up. Could you review back on my Trance song? Criticism is appreciated...

Wilde

Pulstate responds:

Just realised that the delay was still on the crash, FAIL!

I also thought it was annoying, and removed it, but obviously it's in this MP3.

I will take into consideration what else you have said.

I'll review your track when I get time.

Thank you! :)