not bad but
i think all the movements seemed a bit to .... for lack of a better word; solid. Everything seemed mirrored and obviously planned out, variate it a bit and add some scenary or a background make it longer and you have an ok flash.
keep it up
its a start
as the title says its a start but u can do better when u can draw real firgues on your comp
Meh.
OK i wont go into every little detail, but it really wasnt the best ever. Yea it was your first and for that just keep going, you will get better.
Ok. Problems.
It wasnt smooth, they seemed to jerk every time they moved, Better improve lol.
Wasnt really that mutch action, kinda lacked a bit.
The red and blue fight for a while, then u stick a yellow in to win in to secs, yawn.
So improve and come back, ill be waiting.. =p.