Keep Working on it
I like it. I will definitely pick up the finished version.
I loved the intro.
The song isn't completely atypical, comparatively, but it is still different enough from the usual stuff out there now. What i've noticed is as this genre progresses, the people who work on it and post finished stuff on newgrounds for free, are beginning to actually be better than most of the more Main Stream stuff i've heard.
You fall under this description, based upon this WIP. I'm pumped for the final production, so please keep working on it. It's got a lot of potential.