Reviews for Alfred's Playhouse Pt. 2

[Lurie]

Grotesque and Meaningless

This is one of those flash videos that just makes me feel ill. It was unnecessarily gross and pointless... it's as if you were just trying to be offensive and nothing more. You really ought to rethink how you go about this subject matter. Shock value alone can't make this well done. Less focus on sporattic images, and more on animation. Try to hide a little more of what's going on (hint at, don't just show) and add some manner of dialogue/storytelling to explain in detail or simply what is going on.

Watching this video in its current state is about the same as watching someone repeatedly cut themselves, just before proceeding to vomit on the open wound. I don't pity Alfred, I want Alfred to die and be done with it if only to stop watching it.

[Gameeater1]

Seek Help,

Ok, I'm all for experimental flash, and freedom to create whatever you want (Like Bad Baby,) but this was...too much. You need some improvement in the art department, it could be nice. The animation was not smooth, you need to make it less jerky. The sound was hard to hear, and scratchy at the beggining. Plus, the plot made no sense at all, which is kind if annoying for something that got front page.

Now, if this had been done in style, somewhat like Bady baby, or anything by David Firth, it would've gotten a much higher score from me. It needs much improvement.

Now for the final thing, this was insane. It had everything, and it made me sick, which is part of the reason for me rating low. I know that tons of other submissions contain gore, shit, vomit, etcetera, but not like this. It was not tasteful, and it was just awful. I say you discontinue this series, please. As a true flash, it's an abomination. As an experiment, let's just say it fails.

Oh, and to everyone bitching, you guys know that stuff gets on the frontpage because it's outrageously bad, like Jem, right?

[The22ndHat]

Oh dear.

I usually pride myself in well constructed, useful criticism and praise, yet it may prove to be the most difficult review to properly formulate. I'm very sorry to say that this was quite the 0/10. If anything, this should be rated adult, not mature. I have never actually felt nauseous after viewing a flash, and never thought it possible, but I stand corrected.
-22ndHat

[kotharsevant]

most disterbing thing ever

no more flash like this man im twisted in a lot of ways but wow that was just plain grade a crazy! you seem to have the ablity to do well and i hope that you will do less crazy and more story in your flash latter on.

[ngisgood]

what the fuck