Pretty good
To improve on:The animation. Use the text tool, because the words were a little sloppy. The part with the lightning was the worst part.
Reviews for ".:Madness short:."
killer9101 responds:
Ok i had not lighting in madness style and i've done it like shit
But i learned how to do it in madness style
Its ok
Good things:
Good art, even if copied
Just the right length
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Bad things:
No story whatsoever
Not a REAL animation. Couldn't see any tweening...
Bad english
Just need to work on your english and text art, and you'll be fine! Might wanna think of an original idea too.
Tyrael
This wasnt a good movie for me.
The drawings were copied, animation was ok but look at how the timing goes into a piece like this. Experiment with this flash and you will get better. Overall 3/10
killer9101 responds:
Useless review~
When u get em copied u just must put their name in credits...so shut up
Nice movie!!
Your forgot Chesyre, lol.
killer9101 responds:
lol
sweet
pretty fucking good, although you had many spelling errors such as in your little summary thingy, the characters were designed nicly and everything from blood to fighting fit in with madness perfectly, although the animation could use some work and the fighting isnt quite as over-the-top its still okay, good job
killer9101 responds:
pretty fucking good??????? this movie sucks... but anyway thanks