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Reviews for "rooftop skate competition"
smps responds:
thanks buddy
yeah i'll keep updating
don't worry
Amatuer
I think it was a little short and was pretty crap cartoons
Keep working on drawing and ideas.
smps responds:
ok,i will
Needs more
Okay, that wasn't painfully bad, but it was seriously lacking. The title is a bit misleading; it gives the premise of either a literal battle amongst those on skate boards, or some kind of competition. What you have is some people goofing up. The graphics are good. I have nothing against using sticks, but I want to see some fighting on skateboards. Through in some action, and make it longer. Some kind of storyline wouldn't be bad, either, but packed in action will do just as well.
smps responds:
ok, thanks for the comment i'll try to do better in the next on
Short, but pointless.
Personally, I'm not a fan of shorts that have no plot. The graphics weren't too terrible, but there was too much building and not enough stick.
smps responds:
next time i will try to make one better