Looks great!
I can't wait to see what you come up with!
Reviews for "Shattered Heaven Op. 1"
no sound.
It's kind of great, but sound would be nice. 5/10.
AdamTilford responds:
Umm? There's sound I don't know what you're talking about. There's music, and not for nothing, but when do anime intros have sound other than the music? Last time I checked they don't.
Trust me, there will be sfx in the series along with music and VAs.
Choppy
The animation was a little choppy and the coloring could use some work as well. Other then that the animation was ok.
Also I can't stop thinking that this flash bares a striking resemblance to Gundum Seed.
AdamTilford responds:
Hmmm really?
Nah, lol. After writing the first book I wanted to do the art and I had no clue what the mechs would look like. Then I started watching Gundam, namely Zeta, Wing, and Seed. So therefore a lot, if not all of my mecha designs are influenced by them. And then there was the wing design for the main mech, all of my concepts sucked, and soon fell in love with Strike Freedom....lol.
So yeah, Seed was a major influence, whether it was it's awesome music or it's great designs (because the story was filled with plot holes!)
oh no...
no another serie of gigants robots, that is so dumb
only think on it, that is impossible because:
are so big anda easy target to all
a emp canon can pwn these things
the robots can be hacked very easly
cost to much materials his construction
cost to much energy his operation
the gigants robots are gay
are a easy target for the artillery
etc.
the movie was good but the concept was very stupid
AdamTilford responds:
Please, if you're going to try and critique me, or insult my concept then use proper spelling and grammar.
You're entitled to your opinion but the hundreds of people who read my books seem to disagree. And if you think robots make a story then you're very very wrong. First off, cannons are boring, robots aren't. They aren't impossible, if you want to read or watch about things completely modern realistic then watch a documentary.
Pretty good so far!
I think this shows a lot of promise, honestly. I think you've got your artistic style down and have a good sense of what your figures are like in the round. I'd say at this point if you focus on your aesthetics and clean up the art a little bit (I understand a sketchy look is what you're going for, though) and learn a bit more about Flash (play buttons, replay buttons, links to websites, etc.) then you'd really have something here. Keep it up man.
AdamTilford responds:
I do, I would put a play in and the link but my flash is busy converting it to a mov file. When it's done I'll put the links and such in. I didn't think of it until after I posted it. Lol.