This is much better than the first.
You asked me to leave you another rewiew so here it is: Basically just read IndigoExtreme's review below mine. I do have two suggestions though: 1.) If at all possible make it to where the spacebar advances the text. 2.)Speed the text up since because it takes way too long, especially in the secret scene. It slows down the action a whole lot. Oh and one other thing, in secret scene where you made the the ship battle, try and make the sprites actually look like they are shooting at the ship and not straight ahead. All in all you did a great job though keep up the good work! BTW: Feel free to message me again if you need anymore suggestions.