7/10
Not bad for a first animation. I didn't really like the way the text was on the screen, perhaps subtitles, or bubbles would be better.
7/10
Not bad for a first animation. I didn't really like the way the text was on the screen, perhaps subtitles, or bubbles would be better.
not bad for first attempt
for your first this isnt bad at all
i recently posted my first submission
it was of mario too
one of the first things i got was
"i dont like mario stuff"
and "people dont like sprites"
well screw them
make what you want
i liked it
good job and keep working at it
it can only get better
good luck
well
great job for ur first flash, but imma expect more then a couple movements, and blast on a koopa for the next ep. otherwise, keep goin, this is good for a first flash
A few things...
It's a good first submission, but a few things: I like the backgrounds and animation, but it seems like at the beginning the audio is a little out of sync. In addition, the idea for the plot should be a little more developed. Mario tossing fireballs at Koopas is a common theme in EVERY Mario game; a parody should have something totally over-the-top happen. It seems like you have the start of something good here, so take what you've started with, go back to the drawing board a bit in terms of plot development, and you'll have a totally cool Flash movie.