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In my opinion and possibly others, I find that sarcasm is the lowest form of wit. However, the combination of your charasmatic voice and the style of the movie is relatively interesting... but only so because of your flow.
I suggest you stick to ideas that aren't so kashrut... most people have issues with Wal-mart... most people hate crying babies... most people find faults in their city maintenance and budgeting (my opinion). By focusing on broad subjects of typical frustration, I think you are stunting your full potential.
Also, although your movie comes across to most as witty banter, it comes across to me as a vent. You lost your job you have to support a kid, and whats better than getting a high score flash to boost your confidence eh?
Maybe I'm assuming a bit much, but lets say hypothetically, (I'm sure it won't ever happen) that somewhere down the line you ended up working at wal-mart because your boss happened to find young employees cheaper by the dozen. Now lets say every kid that walked in there treated you like an asshole and to make things worse, asked you for a wii ever single day... at least 30 times. If you can see yourself getting pissed off and adding that to your blog, then I think its time you looked deep down and ask yourself---- what is it that I'm REALLY pissed off about. I say--- let it be. Focus on specific issues... tell it how it really is. You might not get everyone agreeing, but who the fuck cares.
p.s. I enjoyed the part about the can.
