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Reviews for "the luigi chronicals ep.1"

Not that bad.

You don't have bad ideas, you just need to improve on a few things:

1- Try to make the characters walk straight on the ground, because sometimes it looks like they are kind of floating.

2- Try to make the animations a little more realistic and smooth. Getting the hang of timing and speed is a must.

3- Make different camera angles. Things like zooms and such can improve the flash a lot.

4- Be careful when you use sprites because you tend to stretch them more than necesary, thus making then look unnatural.

5- Be careful where you place the sprites. Make sure they are all in place and that they look good.

6- Practice, practice, practice. Just try different methods and framespeeds, different speeds betwen the sprites in the movie clips.

With this you can do something decent =)

could be better

it's not a bad start but it could use some work
spelling errors were abundant (not saying my english is perfect :P)
animations could be a bit smoother too
and the jokes were a bit lame
but keep up the good work and you will get there someday :)

Is this your first flash?

It's OK For a first flash, Much better then many other senseless sprite movies actually.

Well...

Not so bad, but the annoying thing is the overlapping music when the scene changes. Also when Luigi jumps in the first scene, you should make that more smoothly and faster. Guess you should work on that.

zombiesurfer responds:

yeah this was pretty rushed, ill do better next time