Good first game
I must say this is a good first game *clap* *clap* if i were u though i would add your own right-click menu, if u pm i could send you script for it so then ppl can't cheat and also having the cirlcle as a mouse hmm, i woulld maybe have it as just the outline and place dot in middle so ppl can see the centre and know where the clicking.
Also you could maybe do some short story clips and make it a good game. Also try improving the scrolls with the messages so it lloks better, also i know u only spent 3 dyas but maybe make it flow from one part to another instead of on or off, add some fading. Also when u kill sum1 maybe add a blood stained screen wiht blodding running down and make it look cooler.
Top tips:
1) Add right click menu-PM me for the script
2)Improve graphics:death, lvl change, story movies and message chooser(add a apartment and ability to upgrade)
3) Keep up good work and try to get sponsored as well as it could become a really fun game
stammersa1