All in all great...
Hello !
First of, I'm exited that you started a series, I think it's gonna' be pretty decent. The thing I liked most in the flash is that the events are going somewhat fast, thus not making it boring, exept when it comes to the subbtitles they tend to go a bit to fast in some instances (in the first scene for exaple...) One thing I have a problem with, is that there is no translation of the song in the opening. Now, I don't have a problem with you showing how the song goes in japanese, actually I think that's pretty cool ! The problem is, that if you do go thru the trouble of making the japanese lyrics, why not make an english translation so everyone can understand... ?
Anyway, it's a good flash, and a good introduction to a series. Keep up the good work and good luck ! :)