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Reviews for "A beginner's compilation"

Last one was ok

The last one was ok, while the three first dragged the last one down. You have to work more on your stick men, they suck. Just search NG for tutorials on the field and you will get much better. I think this flash had been better if you worked mostly on the last one and just submitted that.
I'll give you a 5.

black-raven responds:

i know the stickman sucked, but it looks that way because i needed difirent body parts for tweening, iff i would have used fbf then it would have been better, but well yeah was my first time also drawing with mouse. thanks for the review anyway :)

Cool...

I liked how I could see how you developed as an artist, you defintley did get much better, but one thing for sure is that you need sounds, otherwise it's a bit dull...you have real good potential...keep it up...

black-raven responds:

thanks, i was considering to put sound in it but i didn't want to disturb the sounds of the 2nd flashmovie, my next project will definitly have some music in it. thanks for the review

not bad

Its ok. seems like your very proud of ur self. nothing wrong with that, they aren't that bad anyhow. I haven't even submitted anything yet!

saved by the bell....

well i thought that the last movie was kinda cool, so you got a 4....

????

Uhhh.......

black-raven responds:

mmm thanks for the constructive critisism....
if it is that bad show me how it is done.