No thanks...
[It was very intresting at first! But then it slowly went down-hill the furth I got.]
[Grandmas...don't talk that way. You needed something that actually made you feel like you were in the game, ya know? like: "Oh deary, don't go outside today...yada yada" or something like that. It would inform you that there in fact is something about to own you and builds character.]
[Also, the guy was just plain ugly.]
[The reason why most characters in big hits (LIKE ZELDA!) have cute or cool characters is to keep from people gagging everytime they look at it. And also, so people can try and be like that person. Like Link! He's handsome, helps others, and has a way with words! (Lol.)]
[The maps were also poorly designed.]
[Please be proud of your work before you submit it next time.]