Reviews for You Love This Movie

[reality-check7]

"You love this movie"? Sorry, can't say I did.

I don't doubt that you two put a lot of effort into this cartoon. I'm just saying that it doesn't really show.

Let's start with the graphics and animation -- nothing abysmal, but far from something that I would consider "good". The movements were blocky and unnatural, and the drawings themselves leave a lot to be desired. There really isn't much to do here but just keep practicing, I suppose.

But here's something you can fix right off the bat:

If I didn't know that this was created by two people, I would assume that the differences in the drawings were due to lack of artistic talent rather than two different "styles". I put "styles" in quotation marks because neither of you really have a unique style. To put it bluntly, they're both very generic.

The drawings themselves don't stand out - they have a very "hey, we're both new to Flash" feel to them. And there was no noticable difference in the animation styles... or at least a difference that I could see.

Though some parts were amusing, most of the humor was cheap, dry and overdone. Oh, and you dragged out the IWP gag for WAY TOO LONG. "Trace bitmap faster" was the only thing I found mildy funny out of that long, stale, unoriginal joke.

There wasn't much of a range with the voices. Also, try not to yell into the mic.

I know it seems like I've just been dwelling on the negative, but in the end, that's the stuff that really matters in a review. Better luck next time.

RSQViper responds:

I guess since you don't atually animate anything, ever you wouldn't have any idea of what lots of effort actually looks like so your review is basically a complete sham.

As for yelling in the mic, sorry, you gotta deal with it. Computer mics are only so good.

And I can't say I can get much better luck, so wtf are you talking about? Do you even KNOW what you're talking about?

Do me a favor and don't watch any more of my animations. Looking at your reviews you don't like ANYTHING anyway. Maybe you should stick to TouTube.

[heltec]

I have to say, 4 hours is pushing it

Well, good concept but.... that kinda took a long time. Try limiting it to 10,000 frames in the future, please. Thanks.

RSQViper responds:

I'll do 10,000 frames at 10fps JUST for you!

(This was 17,000 at 20fps)

[Stormweaver]

Was not overly fond of the movie.

While the idea was original, the style was lacking. It had its moments, but those were few and far between for me at least. There is serious room for improvement here. The voices of most of the characters were also very repetitive and I could only really distinguish between a few of them. A few suggestions, brush up the art a little for crisper video, and try getting some voice acters. They are not hard to find. maybe grab a couple friends or something. I know that the voices were supposed to add to the humor, but it didn't really add anything over all for me. So basicaly, good movie, keep at it, voice acters, better animation and art. Simple suggetions and steps. Nice job.

-Stormweaver

RSQViper responds:

We didn't want VAs in this video. That was actually a point to the video.

I usually do use VAs in larger projects.

Art is being worked on, this is actually quite an old project that had to keep the style over a long period of time.

[lockend]

Well, it had a lot of work, i'll give it that.

While I mus admit that you guys did put alot of work into that flash, it seemed a little excessive. Why not spend your time creating your own legend? Many animators have done so, and in your flash you killed the, but they put no more work into their flash then you with this one, put some effort and creativity into it and you'll make it big.

RSQViper responds:

This WAS creative, what are you talking about?

Our time will come with our own series, but BEFORE that can happen we need to define our own styles.

You can't start Flash by making a series. I have an EPIC series I'll start some day, but I know better than to start it now.

As it was, this was a lot of fun to make and I learned a lot. Luckily for us, we also got a lot of attention for it so it's just a major bonus.

[ioliano]

Nothing good

Who wanna action is better no see this is onky talk talk

RSQViper responds:

I have no idea what you just said.