Good,but the faces...
It was very decent,but the smile on sephiroth's face was a bit(i dont say this often,sorry) gay,also the face of cloud was a bit to sharp,try ot make it rounder.
And when he was riding on his motorcycle it seemed a bit fake,try to make it curve slightly or something.
Overal:not a bad job.
Well here I am!
You wanted me to write a review, so thats what I'll do :)
Well, I can start by saying that I am kind of a fan of FF, and I think that you have done quite well on this one, the voices and the sounds were ok, and there was a humour part there. You have thought of most things but this can be greatly improved. The animation was also ok, but you can work on your artwork, the thing you should try to improve is your drawing and that is done by practice, practice, practice...! This wasn't much advice, but I hope that it will help you out.
I will see the follow-up if there is one(not because this was great, but I want see if you have improved and most people improve by just making more flash, sooner or later you're flash will end up at the front page if you keep on making more and getting better) and if you ever wanna talk so just PM me (I love to talk) ;)
-Oboti =D
the voices werent that great were they, i watched it back and get your point, yea i think alot of this could be improved on but i still think its good xD, hope you enjoy the follow up more than this one xd, THNX FOR TAKING THE TIMETO REVIEW, YOUR OPINION IS APPRECIATED Xd
Intersting...
Definitly one of the more interesting FF7 flashes I have seen in a while. Although your plot is very good, you can throw people off by the voice acting and the animation, but other than than this is a well done flash! I can't wait to see the next episode!
P.S. The Kamehameha from DBZ is definitly an interesting addition. Don't worry I'll hold off the lawyers and you make a run for it^.^!
lol it is an interesting addition, thanks alot dude, yea hold them back im gna start running now! xD
okay.
i have to say i agree alot with armed civilian good story but animation and sound could do with a little work.
yea dude i see what your saying =P
I'd criticize harshly, but...
...everyone staring at Cloud after finding out that he had sex with Tifa, that made me laugh. Did he get over Aerith and finally shag Tifa? Wow...and I thought Nanaki would make the first move. xD
But yeah, just a few things:
If this was after DC and AC, then you should have made it 3 years later, considering it was around 2 yrs later that Cloud fought Sephiroth solo. And for him to come back again so quickly, kinds doesn't make sense. =\
Oh, and there was the fact that Barrett ISN'T MR. T!!!! (I pity da fool who confuses the two...wow, quoting and rhyming.,..odd)
But yeah, Tifa should not have known Kamehameha...considering she's a fighter, not one to use magic or a weapon at all. xD
That's all I'll say, but it wasn't bad for an attempt. :)