good job
English is difficult, in fact it is said to be THE MOST difficult language (i disagree and think it's chinese) but still yes it's hard.
Since there were obviously no problems with the actual flash I'll turn to your sentence structure: it was mostly good some tenses were off, there were 1 or 2 words spelled incorrectly and some strange word choices (chicken would be one of them) besides that very very cool
I give you a 10 for the great effort in language (though not perfect) and the amazingly great flash animation. i would suggest using a translator to translate this by the way.