It's different thats for sure
If the main point of this flash was to get the message of the song and the poem, then you could have done it with some sort of animation. Not all of NG's submittions are absolute nonsense. There have been content in the past that had deep meaning, although I'll admit there few and hard to find. Still what you posted is more for a blog than a flash since there was no animation, so it doesn't feel quite appropriate for NG.
Thanks for yor thoughts, and no it wasn't to say nothing on NG has meaning. IT is just to show NG there is otehr styles out there. Also I like to go against the norm.
Beautiful Poem
I liked your poem a lot as well as the music
but your right it is a bit slow.
I dont think this will be appreciated
in newgrounds as much as it should be
mostly because of the audience.
Well Done
Thanks, and you are so right this will not be, but that is ok, people will see it. IF they watch the whole thing good for them, if not I hope they got the meaning. Its all about the meaning there is much to see, but without meaning what is anything?
one word: woah
I haven't seen any flash like this before
a saddening sorrowful flash
you have brought a new side and sense to newgrounds that I have never seen before.
Well done!
Thats what I was trying to do. I figure NG needs some things like this, not just the usual meaningless blabber. Thanks for the coments, and I plan on making all my best weekly poems into these.
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Your writing skills need a little more developement.
Start by looking up the definitions of alliteration, symbolism and hyperbole.
Go from there.
Im not the best writer, but I don't think it was bad at all. It showed deep meaning trully, although if you havent read the book it is hard to catch it all. Thanks forthe coment, and I'll work on my skills.