do it!
the loops quite good and like you said "promising" Its not DnB anymore though ;)
one little thing the bass you have is a little too distorted and borderlines full distortion, maybe some compression could help there?
Great work mate and make it into a full length song!
Part of the problem is the heavy saw wave thats used combined with some of the effects to add emphasis to the distortion. I should be able to kill some of the distortion to make a less distorted sound by tweaking some of the filters and stuff.
Also, yeah, originally it was meant to be DnB, but when I realized how industrial-ish it was, I was like,"ooooh. This is alot better". Im not exactly sure what to do with it in terms of what to add and whatnot, but hopefully I can come up with something. If not, its just a nice concept loop.
Thanks for the review!