hm...
I don't get it, but make it longer and make it an animation.
hm...
I don't get it, but make it longer and make it an animation.
nope
better than the first one
I liked the music and... well there wasn't much more:
no drawing at all but plain </flash> (but this time is hand drawn!): 0/10
no story: 0/10
short piece of music but nice after all: 3/10
no animation: 0/10
Maybe you should add some art, animation and story, but I see some improvement from the first try, so I give you 1/10.
Or maybe your goal is to submit something to the audio portal...
maybe you should die