pssh this was so stupid!
Reviews for "Halloween Goes To Hell"
Your voice.
Your voice has no emotion, all and all ruining this flash.
Good effort!
To start, what you did right: sound quality is, generally, pretty good. There were no points that caused my head to burst or my ears to bleed, which is always a plus. It's apparent that you put a lot of time and effort into this, and it shows.
Now for things that could use work: composition feels generally pretty thrown together, the voice acting is monotonous and gives the submission a weary feeling, and while your art is passable, it still has a ways to go before it reaches the level of, say, littleFoot. And lastly, pacing, which is the single weakest thing in this submission. 35 movies parodied is a nice big number, but 35 short referances to horror movies against a disjointed (read: non-existant) plot-line over the course of 10 full minutes is simply not as satisfying as even one full-fledged parody that only takes a minute and a half. Even the opening title is slow, taking almost a minute to complete, and nothing has happened yet!
The art could also use help, but frankly, art isn't the reason this is a bad submission - it's creative and ambitious, but ultimately it tries to do too much and isn't all that entertaining.
Don't be discouraged! Keep making flash movies, and one day you'll be remember as one of the greats!