Getting there...
I wouldn't say this is Newgrounds material... not in humour, and certainly not in animation. However, I did get a single chuckle out of it... you need to expand on what you've done. There's a few good ideas in there, I think, but right now this movie is, as it was focused on, a brown chunk flying into the Newgrounds flash portal.
Longer, funnier, better animation. (That's NOT what she said.)
-Bam