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Reviews for "CandyHolics"

Hahaha. Cool.

Good Points:

The voices were good, very clear and suited the characters. The idea was pretty decent aswell, and it had a few funny jokes and refrences in there. The lip synching was perfect too :)

Bad Points:

The actual animation was pretty bad, meaning the movement of the characters was pretty jerky. Putting some tweens in there would have helped a lot or atleast a frame between the two movements would make it a whole deal better and smoother.

Overall:

It was enjoyable to watch. I can see you've put a lot of effort into this and it's payed off. I'm going to go check out your other stuff now.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I am trying to improve on making my animations smoother, but thanks for the review and the criticism. I'll try adding more tween to see if that smooth things out. Thank you for the review.

Funny..

Good jokes, pretty good graphics and good sounds.

Btw, having a Tank man costume would be awesome

7/10

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks

It's ok, yet sometimes lazy parts in the flash

Nice halloween flash, and also reasonably funny, let's sum things up!

Pros:
+ Nice characters
+ Difference in voices
+ Funny

Cons:
- Sometimes you spent too little time on some things (like the robot arms putting the Detective Grimoire suit on, or the part with "Can't Touch This")
- Spelling mistakes
- Some jokes weren't funny (like the 4AM one)

Overall: Nice halloween themed flash, yet some parts didn't have enough work to it (like the subtitles or certain parts).

PostTimeskipSam responds:

You didn't like the 4am one...I kinda liked it, anyways I'll spend more time on the less important things in animation to improve the overall quality.

Thanks for the review
+Hylian-Mafia+

meh

it was decent but the animation has to be WAAAAY smoother

Amusing, but has some technical problems.

I really liked the basic plot and it was cool seeing Wonchop, Tankman, Blockhead etc.

It seemed like a bit love-fest for NG-media and it all worked well.

It sounds as if you were a bit too close to your mic at times - there was a bit of noise, specially when you raised your voice. Maybe hold it at arm's length when you're shouting, then raise the volume in Audacity or whatever audio program?

The 'replay' button doesn't work. There was a slight mistake when you put 'collection' and 'opps' instead of 'collect' and 'oops' in the subtitles. Sometimes, the background shading appeared on top of the foreground characters. Be more careful.

Annoyingly, half-way through the movie, the custom cursor appeared in the middle of the screen during the first screen. Don't bother with custom cursors in a movie.

I wasn't too keen n the drawings of the basic characters, but I liked the fact that you had shading and I liked the tankman drawings, as well as som other elements.

Overall, I felt there were a bunch of technical problems that sorta got in the way of the experience, but it remained a funny, amusing movie.

Keep up the cool work, but next time maybe take a little more care.

.:review Request Club:.

PostTimeskipSam responds:

Thanks, I'll do some more testing and fixing problems before releasing the movie. Thanks you for your review. Appreciate it.

+Hylian-Mafia+