well...
you art work wasnt too bad, but the squiggily lines were a bit overdone dont ya thing? also the music was terrible.
Reviews for "Lonely School Project"
Oterro responds:
Yeah, the music does suck, I agree with that myself.. And yeah, I've improved on pretty much everything, in a few months I'll release a flash that's pretty good, at least everyone says that.
if you work on it
it looks like it could be good. the drawing concept is nice but color would defently improve the visibility. probably a light blue shade to empty areas would be a good idea to add more to the picture(any color will work though.) defenetly artistic.