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Reviews for "Waterfall"

Keep flowing!

Like like the whole graphic look to it, layout and everything.

Bravo

Again, nice style, it looks wonderful and artsy.
Unfortunately there are some flaws with this, rocks by the waterfall, as far as I know are always round, or mostly curved, because they have been eroded by water during lots of years, so the first thing that pops up are the straight lines on the waterfall rocks to the left.

Also another thing that looks wrong in my opinion is that waterfalls make foam when they reach a horizontal surface, so if you decide to make something similar, you could make some foam where the water halts so to speak.

And one last thing, that glassy screen really puts me off for some reason, I would either eliminate it, or put it on the entire screen.

Anyway overall this is a great piece of art, hope to see more.

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Thanks and thanks for the detailed review :3

That's a good point about the rocks.

Pretty excellent

The water itself looks very nice, as does all the extra graphics in the picture: The sprites, the trees, the pebbles. The two things I'm confused about, though, are the rocks on either side of the waterfall. They look a bit unreal, like a wall of rocks blandly perched there. Also, where the water falls into the other body of water, you might want to consider a splashing effect. Besides those two things, though, the picture is great.

InsertFunnyUserName responds:

Thanks for the review :3

Yeah, I need to experiment with splashing effects more. I noticed that myself and I tried to fix it, but it didn't come out right, so I just left it out.