it was ok
work on your grammar and work on your event timing (the fire started after sonic hit the ledge by about 2 seconds) other than that it was good
Reviews for "Wrath of Shadow ep. 5"
Shi-Gu responds:
Thanks :D
Alright, lets see...
Good movie overall. But it was far from perfect. First of all, the grammer... I have a big thing with grammer, and I have to say, if English is your main language, you really should have checked yourself.
Now the music/sound. It was good, up untill they warped through the pipe and landed in the ice wasteland, the music sounded like you just used sound recorder to get a free song. But, sound was pretty good.
Graphics is up next. Great! Except for maybe a few things, ie once that robot attacks knuckles tails seems to dissapear, but that might be intentional.
Overall, it was a good sprite movie, I enjoy watching it, thankyou for uploading ^^
Shi-Gu responds:
Thanks, now let´s see
-Grammer: One of my biggest problems, I'm mexican so I'll try my best from now on today
-Well, I actually recorded it but I don´t needed to pay for the real song, it is just because I don't have the program to download it ^^;
-Well, Tails disapear is not intencinal, but a friend give me some ideas so now I'll leave it like that, just think it was intencional ^^
Thanks a lot, I'm glad you enjoyed the movie, that is the best part of the work :D
AHHHH!!!
You need to work on your spelling and some sentences are rather clumsy but great story and animation overall
Shi-Gu responds:
I'm sorry for that
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Nice but....
The dialogue in the text was not TOO well written. The grammatical errors don't usually phase me, and are a small price to pay for an otherwise good flash. But in this case, it really got in the way of enjoying this. But more relevant, the text went at it's own pace either going to slow or too fast (a "next" option would have been nice).
But visually, this was very cool. And, although the exclamation sounds of the charas. got annoying (didn't really mind them. In fact, they add spice to a feature. The problem this time around is that they shouted almost EVERY TIME a new chara. spoke), the music was very fitting to the onscreen action. Nice one.
Shi-Gu responds:
Thanks a lot, now I'll respond the "WHY"
-My english is not that good because I'm mexican and the next one I'll see in a diiccionary before writing, thanks for leting me see that
-The next option is going to be really difficult, in episode 4.1 I was trying it but I had a lot of technical errors and puting sound effects was almost impossible
-I'll try to put less voices next time
Thanks for everything, this is the reviews I like most, CONSTRUCTIVE REVIEWS!!!