not really good
make it longer and maybe add some more words and animations cause to me it looks more like a .gif then a flash
not really good
make it longer and maybe add some more words and animations cause to me it looks more like a .gif then a flash
Better
Than your other stuff
Needs Improvement
This needs some work, on the graphics and on the story. It needs to be a bit longer, too.
What the...
Graphics: N/A
Only a sprite you used so not really graphics, besides the line.
Sound: F
You just used one little tune before Mario suddenly vanishes.
Entertainment: F-
Not entertaining at all, its just Mario walking and he vanishes.
Storyline: F
Original, but BAD
Overall: F
No entertainment whatsoever. No point, make it longer and have an actual plot or something. Don't send in submissions you know will not make it.
I gave this submission a vote of "1"
Learn how to use action scripts for sound optimization and controlling!
thank you!