err no
this isnt better than lillium it just feels like a cheap knock off.
The art was there pretty much but it was clouded in too much lame symbolism. Try actually showing some nasty rather than showing a flower that is bleeding. Symbolism only works as a scare tactic when it surprises you as your brain takes a few seconds to realize what it means. This was just blatant and dull.
Try adding a more complex story.