First off, I...
I don;t think that really qualifies as a parody. It's more of a Naruto/Bleach Cameo strip, really.
I do like that you used the characters after the time skip. Is the anime even up to the time skip yet? It might be a bad idea since :WARNING!! SPOILER!! LOOK AWAY IF YOU DON:T WANT TO KNOW ANYTHING ABOUT NARUTO'S FUTURE!!: it shows Gaara dying. rating WILL plummet, I guarantee it.
also, Nice pein ref. that was funny. I don't know why, but it was funny.