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Reviews for "PotG Episode 1"

~REVIEW~

I didn't care too much for the crowd's cheers of joy, it was really annoying. The colors for the windows and doors didn't look too good with the rings, i'm not sure how to do it but it would look better if the colors blended together. Animation ran smoothly and the lipsyncing was done for the most part perfectly. Great parody and from seeing the pilot episode the series looks like it will be very good if you just put a little more work and length into your episodes.

Badger3112 responds:

The windows did end up a bit funny looking didn't they?

I thought if I traced the bitmap it would fit in better with the rest of the frame but it ended up just looking like a bit of a mess.

The.. Cheering.. Is.. Painful..

The cheering of the crowd.. It's annoying. And it wasn't particularly played well. That kind of cheer is like, from a small group, once. You need to find a cheer of a big group, say, a football crowd, to play instead. It's easily looped and won't make me bleed.

The other main thing is that Pippa looks a bit like a ho. I'm not trying to be mean. She just does.

Planet of the Grapes? Are Raisins Grapes? If so, I never knew that. *Learned something today*

I'd like to see a sequel with some improvements. And a better Cheer noise in an update to this one. >_<

If you want me to review the next one (if there is one) PM me.

NOTE: THIS REVIEW IS NOT ABUSIVE OR UNHELPFUL. PLEASE DO NOT REPORT IT AS SUCH.

Badger3112 responds:

Raisins are dried grapes. The grapes would appear on a planet that the ship would land/crash on. I tried to make it similar to the Planet of the Apes movie and I figured that if apes evolved into humans then grapes sort of evolve into raisins.

Yes, this is probably the most thought that went into any of it.

Ok, one thing.

Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaay. Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay. Yaaaaaaaaaa- STOP USING THAT SOUND I SWEAR TO GOD!

Otherwise, it was a bit slow and needed sounds in a few more places. (the button, the door, etc)

Badger3112 responds:

The cheering annoys even me but i cant find the original flash file (rather than the .swf) so couldn't really change it.