Want to vote 5
You had everything but voice acting. This would be great if you could have found a few people to do your voice acting. You had the animation, sound effects, and music. Even a good plot, just no voices. Please keep up the good work thou
Nice
I thought it was a very good start, although the lack of sound disappointed me but more so because it creeped up every so often and made it seem sketchy, the dialog and storyline was very well done.
Looking forward to episode two.
that was awesome...but
that was really really great, some great art and animation even pretty good story which is rare, buuut it was almost completely silent, no background music, and I can't believe you didn't have voice acting! I'm sure this will do welll, but pleease put voice acting in the second episode, you really need to, seriously. If you need voice actors, you can go to
www.voiceactingclub.com and post yourself an audition with character lines and voice types. Take that advice, we at the VAC work on newgrounds flashes all the time. It'll really improve your flashes. It was great, but the silence was killin' me.
Thanks for the tip. At one point, I was going to add voices, but the problem was I couldn't find someone would work cheap enough or wasn't godawful. But thanks for the heads up on www.voiceactingclub.com. This may have solved my problem.
Interesting character designs
I like the character designs and art concept here, but the dialog doesn't stay on the screen long enough and some parts seem kind of long, which make it hard to follow the story and pick up on character traits. The best solution would be to find voice actors, because this looks like a good series.
Didn't get into it...
Your drawings are nice but without voices I lost the plot.
There was less action, even for a first part. Your chars are nice, so I'll give you a 7.
With more action and voices it would be better. Also improve the music. You can fade in and out to avoid abrupt stops.
I can imagine how long you've worked on your setting/char design. It would take SEVERAL hours for me :) . But improve your sounds and you 'll score higher
Good Luck!