TOO NICE
that movie is to nice man.
WOOHOO!
Reviews for "The Hive: Episode-01"
WOWSER
Wicked artwork, nail biting story, can't wait until the next installment
I gotta say
I really liked the visuals in your submission.
It looks great, unfortunately (for me anyway) it doesn't sound great.
In fact I couldn't hear any dialog !
I was able to read your written text, with no problem... but when a flash looks as good as yours & has no sound to speak of it makes me score it much lower than I normally would.
Nice concept though for a series, good luck.
Interesting character designs
I like the character designs and art concept here, but the dialog doesn't stay on the screen long enough and some parts seem kind of long, which make it hard to follow the story and pick up on character traits. The best solution would be to find voice actors, because this looks like a good series.
that was awesome...but
that was really really great, some great art and animation even pretty good story which is rare, buuut it was almost completely silent, no background music, and I can't believe you didn't have voice acting! I'm sure this will do welll, but pleease put voice acting in the second episode, you really need to, seriously. If you need voice actors, you can go to
www.voiceactingclub.com and post yourself an audition with character lines and voice types. Take that advice, we at the VAC work on newgrounds flashes all the time. It'll really improve your flashes. It was great, but the silence was killin' me.
Grey-Matter responds:
Thanks for the tip. At one point, I was going to add voices, but the problem was I couldn't find someone would work cheap enough or wasn't godawful. But thanks for the heads up on www.voiceactingclub.com. This may have solved my problem.