Reviews for Turtle Park Massacre

[TrashTalks]

as adrienman said-

there are stuff to work on, but he didn't mention that this movie didn't had any storyline- so it made it a little boring...

metallica41 responds:

Yeah, it was never really meant to, just a simple revenge plot. It's really for those who like the senseless violence flash animations.

Thanks for the mate.

My next animation has an actual story.

[DuviMwti]

Ouch!

thet was brutel, dude.

anyway, good graphics and sound, but not much of a story.
and it dosnt "flow", i mean, it makes me feel REALLY slow.

keep it up

~duvimwti, weird name, huh?

metallica41 responds:

Yep, that was the plan, brutality.

Yeah, not much story, I'm sorry it doesn't flow for you.

Unsure how to pronounce that name, but thanks for the review.

[adrienman]

stuff to work on

ok it was nicely drawn, but theres 2 things u really need to work on...
timing and weight -- wen the turtle walked, he just floated, and the whole action was basically the same speed, u need to change that. ( example - wen he hits the other turtle with the baseball bat, wen he goes for the swing use maybe 2 frames to get there instead of like 10 or so

metallica41 responds:

Yep, I'm looking for stuff to work on, thank you.

I see what you're saying, I'll have to experiment with different methods of animation in future animations.

Thanks mate.

[Mirnus]

mmmm.....turtle. haha

I agree with some of the posts before me. It's a hell of an idea. Run with it and make a series!

metallica41 responds:

Well, it's my first real 'animation' so to speak, so I would like to improve.

I'm actually making a western action movie right now, but maybe after that, who knows..

Thanks for reviewing mate.

[I-wont-tell]

dude.. preety fucked up

but AWESOME!!! The voice was perfect, it totally fit and made the flash. the only thing that i had a problem with was the fact that some parts of the flash were smoother than others, so it made the flash really uneven. Next time maybe add a little bit of polish to the rougher parts of the movements and other such things, and this flash would have been perfect!

metallica41 responds:

Hahaha, thanks mate, I can see what you mean about the uneveness.

I think it's some of the tweened parts, I should've shortened/lengthened them.

Thanks for the review.