mmmm..... what to say...
Well... I think I'm VERY generous giving you 6/10... why?, well... where do I start...
The Animation - well, the animation was a mixed bag, the characters, giving them the right direction, can be really charming and memorable, but here, well, they're a bit off. The Frame rate, well, I think you'll better increase even more the frame rate, it seems like the whole animation was in a bullet time slow mo.
The sound - the sounds were pretty nice, the sound from the gas can was from Half-Life 1 :P
Entertainment - the most important thing... and here is where it fails the most.
Heck, it's like seeing a SAW movie, you just want to stop looking, but at the same time, you want to know what happens next. I'm a big fan of the absurd gore (I'm not a demented psycho XD), but this will turn most people off, it's just so violent, and there's no real reason for the massacre, heck, it's not even a massacre, it's two unjustified and unfair murders in one lash in less than 5 minutes.
You have great potential, and I'm looking forward to see more from you, and what I mean more, I mean, more fun, even if it's going to be another massacre, at least, make it fun.
And, for the viewers, I won't reccomend to anyone.