not bad...
i guess.....
Reviews for "Three:Escape part-a"
maddskill responds:
i guess too lolz
It was alright...
It was pretty good, the only problem is when your characters die, they don't die realistically. For instance, when one was choked to death and he slumped over, he didn't seem to be slumping against the wall. He looked like he was still standing. I think you might want to work on that. Otherwise, your drawing and animation was fine.
maddskill responds:
yea i know ill redo that today
thx for the review!
Not too bad!
Very nice colouring and emotions, and the characters don't look the same - well, not all of them. That's a good thing.
But what you should improve on first is active poses, especially in fights. When your characters throw a punch, make them express the effort, and show how their body moves - with simple characters, that isn't so hard. I'm still practicing that. But practice makes perfect.
Good luck, and looking out for more of your stuff.
maddskill responds:
thx ill be sure to imporve in part b!
thx for the review
Great potential
Try getting some voices and maybe some back story so we know who the three are, but other than that it was great!
maddskill responds:
yea after they escape from the lab it tells there story and # 1 kinda did alzo well mostly a blur of it.
thx for the review glad u liked it!
it was ok
not that great. the music didn't really sync, there wasn't a lot going on, very slow moving. The art style was way too simple. It was just shy of stick figures. they were basically madness style sticks. There were too many tweens, and they didn't move very quickly. It needs some work. Not horrible, but not that great.
maddskill responds:
ehh ill take it thx for the review