Good
Your animation was good enough to me to gave it an 8, if i were you i would put a background in the close-scenes and...actually i would put a background always!
Good
Your animation was good enough to me to gave it an 8, if i were you i would put a background in the close-scenes and...actually i would put a background always!
This is good
My first flash was horable this is very very good for your first flash atempt! Keep up the good work!
Well.......
I dont say u suck....I just say u need alot of improvements in ur artworks.....still a good job on the story :)
Dont give up!!!
Pretty good for first flash
keep working on it and you will get there take it a step at a time
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is there a plot?